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“One Kilogram” project

                                      

今天在一公斤项目的blog上看到了关于这个项目的英文介绍,很佩服他们的热心和工作的努力,英文翻译得不错。不过有些地方如果换一种表达可能会更清楚一些,我稍作了一些修改,红色的地方是我改过的。

What is the "One Kilogram" Volunteer Project?

The "One Kilogram" is a volunteer project which focuses on improving life quality and education level of children in impoverished areas of China. It is organized by a group of youth who have rich experience as both volunteers and travellers. The project aims to encourage travellers to bring gifts to schools and students in impoverished regions when they travel. It also encourages them to help impoverished children grow up healthily by face-to-face communication,transfering ideas and knowledge ,and developing their abilities.

The "One Kilogram" project devotes itself to developing a nation-wide information platform for travelling donors. Via the platform,travellers can get the information about the schools which are in their routes in advance,send their gifts to the schools or other appointed reception locations,and bring the feedback about the result of donation into the platform which will help more people know about it and participate in it. Meanwhile, in addition to offering material gifts, the "One Kilogram" project organizes various activities to assist impoverished students, such as "I have a dream", "Write a booklist", "Have a lesson for the children"。From both material and spiritual aspects we try our best to help them grow up healthily。

The "One Kilogram" project's mission is to advocate the idea of "public-spirited tourism" which, by innovating project module and integrating resources, provides travellers more convenient and fruitful experience in public-spirited tourism and improves the life and education quality of impoverished children in a sustainable way!

To get details and the latest news about the "One Kilogram" project, please log in to our forum, or send us an email message(.1kg@1kg.cn).

希望更多的人都能参与到其中。详情请见一公斤项目的主页http://www.1kg.cn      blog:http://www.blogbus.com
 


【作者: 冰烯】【访问统计:】【2005年01月9日 星期日 11:45】【注册】【打印

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你可以使用这个链接引用该篇文章 http://publishblog.blogchina.com/blog/tb.b?diaryID=521428

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- 评论人:Jessica   2009-02-06 21:51:08   

4 你好,现在通过下面链接可以备份您的博客: http://home.myspace.cn/blogmove.aspx 快去看看^_^ bokee.com 66457

- 评论人:冰烯   2005-01-16 17:05:43   

你翻译得很好,我其实只是在你的基础上作了一点点修改,做得工作很少。你的意见我很赞成,希望有机会能多交流!

- 评论人:Rita   2005-01-16 11:30:25   

"并且通过与孩子们面对面的交流, 传递观念、知识和能力,促进孩子们的健康成长"这句话在刚翻译时我也翻成“ It also encourages them to help impoverished children grow up healthily by face-to-face communication,transfering ideas and knowledge ,and developing their abilities.”后来拿去给外教校对的时候他帮我改成了“by using face-to-face communication of ideas,knowledge,and abilities. ”,因为在面对面的交流中其实就包含了观念、知识和能力的传递和培养。我自己认为这样翻译更为简洁:)

2.kg将致力于建设一个面向全国的旅游捐赠信息平台,通过这个平台,旅行者可在出游前在平台查找旅途沿线的学校信息,在平台的指导下将物品送达学校或指定接收地点,并将捐赠的结果反馈到平台,让更多的人了解并参与。
The “One Kilogram” project devotes itself to constructing a nation-wide information platform for travelling donors. Via the platform,travellers can get the information about the schools which are in their routes in advance,send their gifts to the schools or other appointed reception locations,and
bring the feedback about the result of donation into the platform which will help more people know about it and participate in it.

The “One Kilogram” project devotes itself to constructing a nation-wide information platform for travelling donors. With help of the platform, travellers can have the access to information about schools where help is needed along their routes in advance, and send their gifts to the schools or other appointed reception locations. What’s more, via the platform, travellers can give feedback, which will help promote understanding and participation in the project.

恩,这一段你翻译得比我简洁多了,更容易让人理解,向你学习咯:)

3.1kg的使命是:倡导“公益旅游”观念,通过创新的项目模式和各方资源的整合,为旅行者带来更加方便丰富的公益旅游体验,为贫困及落后地区的儿童生活和教育水平带来持续有效的改善。
The “One Kilogram” project’s mission is to advocate the idea of “public-spirited tourism” which, by innovating project module and integrating resources, provides travellers more convenient and fruitful experience in public-spirited tourism and improves the life and education quality of impoverished children in a sustainable way!

The “One Kilogram” project’s mission is to advocate the idea of “public-spirited tourism” which, by innovating project module and integrating resources, brings sustainable improvement in life quality and education of impoverished children.

这段漏译一句话,真是不好意思啊,失职:(
把“持续有效的改善”译为improves the life and education quality of impoverished children in a sustainable way也比brings sustainable improvement 要好,不过“为旅行者带来更加方便丰富的公益旅游体验”我觉得应把其中的convenient改为convenience似更妥当,因为用convenient来形容experience在英文里是很怪的,所以在这里用名词,把“方便”和“体验并列起来”,虽然改变了中文句子的结构,但意思没有损害,也更符合英文表达的文法。



- 评论人:冰烯   2005-01-09 22:06:00   

现在我能做的也只有这些。我已经注册了,以后会经常去的。

- 评论人:张霞   2005-01-09 15:52:31   

冰烯你很强啊,有这样的人关注并参与1kg的项目,1kg肯定能够很快成长起来的!
欢迎你到1kg的论坛上来http://www.1kg.cn/onekg/bbs/,网友讨论主要在那里进行,关于项目进展,关于聚会消息等等。

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